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Post by Frank (Dr.) Facilier on Apr 16, 2011 23:39:08 GMT -5
No problem keep it up XD
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Post by Two-Tone on Apr 17, 2011 0:10:42 GMT -5
welcome ^^
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Post by Alice on May 1, 2011 20:42:41 GMT -5
A quick update: due to not having a computer until tinkles I will try to get at least two of these up tomorrow. Silver and Lucky yes will be up tomorrow evening.
Lucky- I will try my best with Rebecca's accent so if it isn't right srry.
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Post by Two-Tone on May 2, 2011 0:58:47 GMT -5
cool
I hope my story will come soon too Patch ^^
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Post by Wilbur Robinson on May 2, 2011 1:04:46 GMT -5
Yeah, it will come when it comes
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Post by Alice on May 4, 2011 0:09:37 GMT -5
Here you go Silver, sorry it took so long. Lucky, yours is up next. Anyways, the scenrio was that Parker was lonely and Silver goes to try to cheer him up. But i wanted to make it more fun. so here you go
Advice from the Boss
Patch sat in the park watching some of the local kids running and playing. A few of them had dogs with them. Oh, how he wanted to go play as well. He could almost imagine the weird looks he would get from talking to dogs. His blue eyes fell on the napkin that the girl from the restaurant had given him.
‘Oh, what do I do?’ he thought angrily as he brushed his blonde hair out of his face.
One thing was for sure, he never thought being a human would be so hard. Being a dog may have had its flaws but it was easier than this.
“Problem lad?” the voice of John Sliver broke the boy’s thoughts.
‘You don’t know the half of it.’ He thought before answering with a shrug. “Sort of.”
The man took a seat. Patch didn’t need an invitation to talk. He knew that the man was going to listen, and he was going to talk. No matter what the deal was. “I have a problem, a girl gave me her number.”
The pirate raised an eyebrow. “No offense lad, but isn’t that a good thing?”
Patch opened his mouth to say something but closed it again. Sure, a girl giving a boy her number was a good thing. He, however, was not a human. He was a dog. No, not even a dog. He was a puppy. Not even a full grown dog. “What if she made a mistake.” He said suddenly. “That’s it, she made a mistake.”
His boss shook his head with a smile. “You made her feel better Parker. She couldn’t have had made a mistake.”
“She doesn’t deserve me!” Patch yelled. “I’m a nobody! She wouldn’t even consider me, a “one of a kind” guy.” He kicked the ground angrily and buried his face in his hands. “Why does life have to be this way?”
“Now you listen to me Lad.” Sliver stood up and stared the boy down until Parker looked at him. “You’ve got the makings of greatness in ya. Everyone does,” he placed his hands on the boy’s shoulder. “Everyone’s different. Just give it a shot, she might surprise ya.”
Patch smiled and moved a piece of blonde hair from his face. His blue eyes were no longer filled with confusion but with pride and happiness. “Alright, I’ll give it a try.” He turned and gave a wave to the man before walking away towards home.
“Good luck Lad,” the old pirate said with a smile “Good luck.”
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Post by Alice on May 4, 2011 0:30:34 GMT -5
Here ya go Lucky, this one is really my favorite. I hope you like it to, and yes, Wilbur and the others purposely led Lucky to Rebecca.
That girl of Sunshine
Lucky ran after his friends with a smile on his face. Cadpig and Rolly were up to something and he wasn’t sure what and apparently the famous Wilbur Robinson was in on it. The horseshoe dog wanted to know what, however, due to his new human life, he couldn’t read this siblings and their friends as well as he wanted to. He was not that dog anymore.
‘Darn it. Where did they go?’ he thought as he walked down the pathway towards the beach. ‘What those three up to?’ he kicked the ground in frustration yet, he was happy to be with everyone again.
The boy continued to walk down the trail until he stopped. The young blonde girl from school, Rebecca was standing in the waves. Letting them lick against her toes.
“Hey Rebecca!” he called.
The girl turned with a smile. “Oh, hello there Luke.” She said. “Isn’t it a beautiful day?”
“Y-yeah it is.” He said running up to her. “What are you doing here?”
“I was just enjoying the waves. They feel so good.” She said with a smile. “What are ye doin’ here?”
“Oh well…I lost sight of Ryan and Cassie.” he said. He felt his heart leap. What was this feeling? He hadn’t felt this way about anyone before. Why did she have to look so cute?
“That’s too bad…” the blonde girl said.
Lucky nodded, he scaled her up and down for a moment. The girl was wearing a pink Victorian dress today and her eyes were shinning with happiness which caused Lucky’s stomach to give another lunge.
“Do you want to take a walk with me?” he asked suddenly. The girl looked confused but a warm smile arose on her lips.
“Aye, I would.” She said.
Lucky watched as she placed her shoes on her feet and stood by his side. The two started walking again. The beach was practically empty, and the waves were crashing into the shore.
“Are you feeling better?” he asked asking after he remembered that Tara had punched her. “How’s your face?”
“It’s fine, much better…” the girl said. “How are you?”
“I’m…I’m pretty good.” Lucky said with a smile.
He watched as the wind slowly lifted the girl’s blonde hair off her shoulders and then lightly lifted it back down. This was probably the first time that Lucky had seen Rebecca truly happy. She was beautiful. She shined like sunshine.
‘Say something nice you idiot.’ A voice slowly filled his head. ‘Say something good, compliment her, do something!’
“Umm…I like…I like your feet.” Lucky said.
Rebecca raised an eyebrow and giggled causing Lucky’s face to turn bright red. “I’m glad ye like my feet..’
Lucky gulped and rubbed the back of his head sheepishly. ‘I like your feet? Really, I like your feet?’ his inner voice asked. ‘That was the best you could come up with? I like your feet?’
“Ye know Luke, I was kind of sad when I first came here…” Rebecca said, as she stopped walking. She turned to stare out at the sunset.
“Really?” he asked.
“Aye, but now…I’m not so sad..” she turned and smiled.
Lucky smiled, a big smile. Rebecca was a free spirit. Oh how much she reminded him of the sunshine. She glowed and shinned brightly. True, she was different but there was nothing wrong with being different. It’s what made her special. Slowly, he wrapped his hand around the girl. He turned to her.
“I’m glad…” he said before giving her a quick kiss on the cheek.
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Post by Lucky on May 4, 2011 0:36:34 GMT -5
"I like your feet" XDDDDDDD
I love it, thanks! And that line... that line made me laugh so much!
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Post by Alice on May 4, 2011 0:41:30 GMT -5
^.^ well i figured it would work. and no problem. Glad you like it. its one of my personal favorites
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Post by John Silver on May 4, 2011 7:56:52 GMT -5
Lucky's right that line is so hilarious XDDD Anyway I love the fanfic you made for me! Silver is just the fatherly type!
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Post by Two-Tone on May 4, 2011 16:02:49 GMT -5
cool
Patch I can hardly wait for my story next ^^
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Post by Lucky on May 4, 2011 16:31:42 GMT -5
I love that line so much I'm using it as my personal quote on this account - hope you don't mind that ^^
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Post by Alice on May 4, 2011 17:17:44 GMT -5
of course i don't mind ^.^
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