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Post by cadpig1099 on Mar 10, 2011 15:04:12 GMT -5
Quote: I need help to get me out of here... anything!
Disney Name: Penny
Human Name: Penny
Age: 14
Human Hair Color: Blonde
Human Eye Color: Brown
Human Appearance: Penny has long, blonde hair that goes down near her breasts. She has thin, bright pink lips and some diamond earings.
Disney Character Picture: 
Human Form Picture: 
Celebrity Face Claim: Aimee Teergarden
Personality: Penny was quite surprised when she found out that she could walk on two legs and had no tail. She still has a bit of fashion sense in her though. She likes to hang out with people when she knows who they are. She also likes to watch television in an Apartment she lives in.
Likes:
Tripod
Cadpig
Lucky
High School
Walking on two feet
Dislikes:
Cruella
Some of the humans
Falling and cutting herself
Being made fun of
Some of the Celebrities
Occupation: High School Student
History:
Penny was quite happy in the Farm where all the animals were. She loved playing with her siblings and sometimes liked to help Two-Tone choose something to wear.
One day she was out with Lucky, Cadpig, Rolly and Spot when suddenly everything went white. "What's happening?" Penny thought. The next thing she knew, she was standing up on two feet and had no tail! "Hey what happened to my paws?" She asked herself. "Never mind, I'm sure I can do this!" She put her paw-er, hand into a pocket she had and suddenly a card was in her hand. "Where did this come from?" she asked. Someone was nearby, skating on a board and shouted; "Hey that's a Bank Card!" he shouted. It was a boy with a top on and a long-sleeved top under the normal top. He reminds me of someone... He talks familiar... Penny wondered. Agh, never mind.
She went to a hole in the wall that people called a "Bank" and inserted her Card in. Various things came up on the monitor and Penny tapped things. Once she was done, money came out - Like Magic! "200, 250, 300" Penny counted as she shuffled the notes. "WOW I can rent an apartment with this money!" and with that she headed to the Estate Office.
"So you want to rent an apartment miss?" A man asked. "Yes please, that would help me alot" Penny replied. Penny waited and waited until... "Here you go. You live there now miss" Penny waved. "Bye! Thank you!"
On the way to her new apartment, Penny was thinking about her siblings and what could have happened to them...
Sample Post: Penny was lying down on the Setee of her Apartment the night before she went to High School, thinking what she does in High School. "Do I learn? Do I play? Do I pounce? I don't know..." she said to herself. She was quite anxious about going to High School, because she never knew what it was going to be like.
Later the next morning, when everyone was settled in in class, the teacher gave out math sheets. Penny rattled her pencil and she chew it.
What if she couldn't do this? She gave it a big try, then handed it in. The teacher checked it carefully. "Well done Penny, you got a B on your first day of High School"
Penny was thrilled at this, but she kept her hyperness inside. After all, she still had her INNER puppy, didn't she?I'm sorry, but I want to stop playing as her, anyway, I'm never even active x.x |
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Post by Lucky on Mar 10, 2011 15:27:21 GMT -5
Why did she change her name? 'Penny' is a perfectly acceptable human name - I can't see why she'd have needed to change it ^^"
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Post by cadpig1099 on Mar 10, 2011 15:30:16 GMT -5
Why did she change her name? 'Penny' is a perfectly acceptable human name - I can't see why she'd have needed to change it ^^" Yeah... I better change it Luck.Changed. |
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Post by Xandra "The Witch" on Mar 10, 2011 15:37:10 GMT -5
Just two things, I need you to expand her personality more please. And what happened to her once she got to the real world? Where did she go? Is she living with a family or is she an orphan?
Just fix this and I can approve.
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Post by cadpig1099 on Mar 10, 2011 15:43:36 GMT -5
Just two things, I need you to expand her personality more please. And what happened to her once she got to the real world? Where did she go? Is she living with a family or is she an orphan? Just fix this and I can approve. I didn't think of that... DXFixed again.  |
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Post by Lucky on Mar 10, 2011 15:57:51 GMT -5
Another minor thing - her age should be 14, not 15 - all of Pongo and Perdy's kids have to be the same age, and I established that Lucky was fourteen in my app.
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Post by cadpig1099 on Mar 10, 2011 15:59:07 GMT -5
Another minor thing - her age should be 14, not 15 - all of Pongo and Perdy's kids have to be the same age, and I established that Lucky was fourteen in my app. I changed it again Lucky... -sigh- |
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Post by Xandra "The Witch" on Mar 10, 2011 16:04:48 GMT -5
I hate to be a pain in the neck but you still haven't told me what happened to her when she became human. Basically because of the dalmatians that we've had here I need to know if she's living with a family or at an orphanage.
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Post by cadpig1099 on Mar 10, 2011 16:06:40 GMT -5
I hate to be a pain in the neck but you still haven't told me what happened to her when she became human. Basically because of the dalmatians that we've had here I need to know if she's living with a family or at an orphanage. Sorry  |
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Post by Xandra "The Witch" on Mar 10, 2011 16:19:44 GMT -5
Okay, that's all I wanted but I explained this to another player. Legally Penny cannot live on her own. She's 14 which is too young legally to live on her own. I'll show you what i said to the other player: "unless Louise has been emancipated (meaning she has been deemed it by the court to live on her own which means she can support herself finacially) then she cannot be living on her own." So she's either gotta be living with parents or in the orphanage or on the streets only because she's so young.. I'm sorry I'm being such a pain but that's the way it works in this world, they follow real world legal laws.  |
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Post by cadpig1099 on Mar 11, 2011 4:06:18 GMT -5
Okay, that's all I wanted but I explained this to another player. Legally Penny cannot live on her own. She's 14 which is too young legally to live on her own. I'll show you what i said to the other player: "unless Louise has been emancipated (meaning she has been deemed it by the court to live on her own which means she can support herself finacially) then she cannot be living on her own." So she's either gotta be living with parents or in the orphanage or on the streets only because she's so young.. I'm sorry I'm being such a pain but that's the way it works in this world, they follow real world legal laws. Okay... (I suck at this now  ) |
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