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Post by Frank (Dr.) Facilier on Apr 12, 2011 15:01:32 GMT -5
OK! Thanks to inspiration from my good bud patch I wanted to do stuff here myself. So let's get some rules about me before I start:
Requests: Yes I take requests and you are permitted for any fanfic you want but I will not be perfect so if it sucks I'm truly sorry and as for timing IT SHALL BE DONE...... but just not as quick as you would like
Flaming: We should replace it as "Meanie talk" because that's how I put it. I ask that if you don't like what I write either review it NICELY or you don't read at all simple as that
Ideas/tributes: I may do one for you just for the hell of it or for your special occasions such as your Bday but I have my own way of writing and if you don't like it say it nicely and tell me how to approve. However I have my own ideas and this may lead to me doing them first instead of your request sorry ^^;
Other than those things HAVE FUN READING!!!!!
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Post by Wilbur Robinson on Apr 12, 2011 16:19:12 GMT -5
i shall make a request when i think of it!
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Post by Frank (Dr.) Facilier on Apr 12, 2011 16:37:32 GMT -5
OK! so intil then here's a sneak peek of my Silver/facilier adventure I'm working on! For the record it has nothing to do with the currant plot it's more of a "What if?" adventure. I will definitely put more facilier/silver stories involving the current miami plot but here it's just what if they did these things. OK, as of this plot it's simple Silver and facilier are working together to catch a simple and wanted criminal residing in miami. How they meet will be explained once I think about it but for now you'll just have to wait
Trail of adventure preview
"Where do we hide John?!" A nervous Facilier shouted "In there! Hurry!" John yelled as he pointed to a abandoned building. Facilier ran inside as John yelled "Bloody twits! Get outta my sight!" John then punched the two men unconcious. When the men fell John carried the men and put them near the lake and then went back for his new friend. Facilier just panted and said "I woulda helped y'all but that jerkoff stabbed me around the stomach" Facilier then showed the bleeding side to John
John helped facilier lay down and said "Easy mate. I know how to do SOME healin' but I can only stop the wound from bleedn' the rest is up to the hospital" Facilier nodded and simply said "Thanks Silver" John nodded and grabbed his backpack that he took along with them just incase and John got some bandages that he kept as well in case something would happen to HIM instead.......
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Post by Wilbur Robinson on Apr 12, 2011 16:46:54 GMT -5
oh i like the preview! it looks good.
here's the idea for a request:
Characters: Parker (Patch), Alice, and Wilbur and Silver idea: later after the resturant is closing, Wilbur and Alice come from town to join their friend Parker to here some of Silver's tales
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Post by Frank (Dr.) Facilier on Apr 12, 2011 17:21:49 GMT -5
Patch aka alice, will, sis bunny, lotti. Your wish is granted
The tales of treasure planet
The restaurant was closed. Parker(also know as patch)had a pleased look on his face as the rest of the customers left and patch practically ran to the door and put the CLOSED sign on it. Parker then ran to the table that Silver was sitting on and said "I can't wait! Why must alice and will take so long?!" Silver chuckled and said "Lookie here lad the most important thing ya need to know is patience" Parker grumbled and said "They should be here right now though they said they would come!"
"Mr. Siver's right parker. You must know patience" A girl's voice said and it turned out to be alice and will was right beside her laughing as if alice made a joke. Parker smiled and said "C'mon in guys silver's gonna tell us about pirates" Alice took a seat right next to parker and will sat next to silver and then will said "Pirates?! Oh wow! Sounds cool! Tell us" Silver laughed and said "Alright kiddies. Get yourselves ready because I'm gonna tell ya the legend of Treasure planet"
Will looked confused and said "Treasure planet? What's that" Silver patted will's back and said "First you need to learn the story behind it. OK, legend says that there were many safe ships........ until a famous pirate named Captain Nathaniel Flint attacked these constant wealthy ships and his crew along with himself took all there treasure and then they would always vanish without any sign of them gettin' anywhere aroun' places" Alice gasped and both parker and will went together "Whoa"
Silver said "Flint's treasure trove wasn't found for a long time. The stories.... and facts say that it was a wasteland planet with the loot of a thousand worlds...... Treasure planet" Will then stood up and said "I knew Treasure planet was mentioned for a reason!" Alice shushed will and silver proceeded to the story "That is until a boy named Jim hawkins found a map that lead him to the treasure and it lead to epic portions!"
As silver explained about the journey the boy Jim made and all the parts of him meeting people. Alice along with parker and will listened very clearly. They gasped around when they heard about Scroop attacking Jim. They laughed about Morph's antics. They felt fearful around the cliamax of the planet explosion. But they were most curious and interested with Jim's relationship with the cook and leader of the mutiny John silver. They loved how they got along and hated how they fought and cried when silver had to leave.
Silver then finally replied "Silver dissappeared and Jim grew up in a happy life the end" Parker then said "That was amazing! Jim was such a hero!" Silver smiled "That he was lad. That he was" Alice nodded "Silver was cool too I wish that he didn't leave" Silver felt a huge pain of guilt come inside of him and he mumbled "So do I lassie" Will then said "My favorite part was when silver said to Jim that he was destined for greatness" Parker and alice both replied "Mine too!"
Parker then gave a shocked face and he instantly stared at silver and asked "Your names John silver! I know alot of people can be named that but....... do you know this stuff because you witnessed it?" Silver stood up and said "Yep! You're right lad. Everything I told you was not a fictional story they were facts. But I was not a witness, I was a lead role in all of it. I did the mutiny, I saved Jim's life and I was the cook John Silver" All three children looked in such shock and then the three then sat down and asked him plenty of questions and after silver answered them all parker said "Can you tell us more?" Silver looked at the clock and saw that it was late and said "Tomorrow night kiddies. You three best be gettin' some shuteye as do I now see you tomorrow mornin' parker and you alice and will I'll see tomorrow night"
As the three children went home Silver locked the restaurant and as he walked home he said to himself "I miss Jimbo but at least I got me some new pals"
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Post by Patch on Apr 12, 2011 17:28:36 GMT -5
I loved it! it was so cute! You got Will's character perfectly, and the ending was so cute! Thank you for doing this for me!
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Post by Frank (Dr.) Facilier on Apr 12, 2011 17:29:41 GMT -5
Anymore you need just simply ask! No problem. And yeah will was easy to type
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Post by Wilbur Robinson on Apr 12, 2011 19:24:21 GMT -5
okie dokie
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Post by John Silver on Apr 12, 2011 21:04:17 GMT -5
OK. This is chap 1 of my facilier/silver story. Review if you wish.
Trail of adventure Chapter 1
Silver whistled as he worked at the place he worked alongside parker at. Parker came and rang the bell giving a paper that had an order "It says a shrimp gumbo, beginets and a tall glass of water and the gumbo needs a little spice" Silver whistled "He'll need that water if he wants a spicy gumbo but it will be there shortly parker. Who ordered it if it ain't too much to ask" Parker nodded to a black man in a business suit and the man grinned at the waitress who giggled at him as if he was flirting.
Silver rolled his eyes "Please. Ah well, one order coming up!" After some time the gumbo along with the water and beginets were ready and silver grinned slyly at parker "I made SURE it was hot" Parker snorted but then said "You could get a complaint and that man's a lawyer" Silver chuckled "I ain't afraid of lawyers besides I'm notin' if I ain't a kidder" Parker shrugged and said "Good luck silver" With that parker gave the gumbo to the man and left to do more orders =================================================== After long hours of work the restaurant was closed and parker was on his way hom and silver was close to locking the door when the same black man came and said on a defiant tone "Hey y'all that cook right?" Silver nodded "That I am mate who wants ta know?" The man looked in a glare then his whole face changed into a pleased smile "That gumbo was amazin' y'all got a gift!" Silver smiled proudly "Why sir pleased for you to praise my humble subtle gift. I feel lighter than a feather with praise like that" Then the man shook Silver's and said "Frank Facilier lawyer extrodinare how y'all doin?" Silver grinned and said "John silver's my name. Me friend parker said something about that job of yours"
"Parker?" Facilier looked confused and silver replied "That young lad servin' you" Facilier nodded "Oh! That kid. He's a nice one and I saw ya chatting up with him" Silver smiled then asked "You need me for anything else before I close?" Facilier sighed "Scotch. Because I'm frustrated beyond belief" Silver shook his head "We don't get that due to this being a noalcahol facility but we have cider" Facilier nodded "Anythin' would do man" Silver opened the doors and said "Come right on in mate" +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ OK, the drama and action will begin later but as of now we learn all about how they meet and such.... oh and parker has a cameo appearance because he's awesome <3
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Post by John Silver on Apr 16, 2011 16:52:57 GMT -5
OK. This is where they start their adventure. It gets curiouser and curiouser. HA! Alice reference. Enjoy! ======================================= Trail of adventure Chapter 2 Silver got out the cider and two glasses and handed one to the man next to him and then said "So tell me mate. What's the trouble with ye?" Facilier rubbed his forehead and sighed "Well, my boss gave me a case of a wanted murderer who's on the run and is residing here in Miami. I need to find him and get the police in action so I can prove he needs to be locked up and prevent him from getting to Texas." Silver looked confused "This is bad WHY?" Facilier sighed again "I want to find him, it's not the case I hate it's just I CAN'T find him. I looked in the most likely scumbags like him go to and it ain't working" Silver rubbed his chin and replied "Well, maybe this 'scumbag' isn't hiding in dirty places maybe you should find em in the places that lawyers like you would most likely overlook. Criminals always act dirty so lawyers think they go to dirty places but actually this person probably has a really clean apartment or somethin'" Facilier looked at him in offense "Thanks for the advice Silver but I DID go to there so what now" Silver frowned "Then simply he's someplace FAR from anywhere of the city. He's probably somewhere that's abandoned but who be a cook to argue with a lawyer?" Facilier raised himself forward to Silver's face so the both of their faces were in close range of each other as he said "I think y'all know this stuff a little too well. I need you to come with me" Silver raised his hands up "Whoa mate! I don't go to do that anymore. I'm a cook I can't help ya" Facilier smirked "Anymore? So you HAVE done it in the past. Y'all ain't gonna get in trouble if that's what you're frightened about. I'll let you slide and even pay you if you help" Silver grinned greedly, he did still like the sound of getting payed even though he cared for people alittle more but still money was cool. Silver held his hand out and facilier shook it "So we got ourselves a deal silver?" Silver nodded "That we do sir that we do" ======================== Oh so what if John's still greedy. He at least is doing the right thing. Anyways, John may be a funloving caring gone but all people here ain't perfect so silver has definitely a few quirks such as greed and we all know facilier's greedy too so this gives them a connection plus I love that line of facilier's "So we got ourselves a deal?" Which is why it's on here
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Post by Frank (Dr.) Facilier on Apr 16, 2011 21:52:27 GMT -5
Well I was deciding to dedicate this to alice and Silver since I love them. This idea came from a coment I made that Silver would make friends with anyone even anti-social alice. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Curious girls make smart girls
Alice was minding her own business at the restaurant where her friends Silver and parker worked. Unfortunately for her Sis came and pounded on the table ending the lovely conversation and loud enough for a lot of people to hear. The restaurant was dead silent and alice was scared stiff.
Sis grabbed alice and yelled in her face "You freak of nature! You humiliated me at that classroom and that ended up into a detention! Now these people will know what a bitch you are and you're gonna wish you were never born!" Sis then gave a hard slap to alice's face and then was about to slap her again when a firm and rough hand pushed it down and squeezed it enough to make sis yelp and let go. She turned to see who did that and it was silver who's face looked so angry that if he were a cyborg his right eye would be glowing in dark red and his voice was in a growl "Get out of here. NEVER touch Alice again! If I hear or see ya hurting her so help me I'll call the police on your little brat hide! Now leave" Sis ran away as fast as she could
Alice looked at the running girl then at silver then ran out of the restaurant herself with Silver running to her calling her name finally alice stopped and sobbed around a tree in the park and silver sat beside her, picked her up and gave her a loving hug and kept shushing her. Ailce managed to speak while still hugging silver "S-she was up-upset that I told the teacher that-that she was texting in cl-class. I was just trying to make her pay attention!" Silver wiped her tears away with his left hand and said "Easy lass. You did nothing wrong. That girl needs to know that she can't harm innocent people at all. What she did was wrong and you aren't to blame" Alice sobbed out "But she always punches me and calls me freak. Maybe I-" Silver put one of his hands to her mouth to quiet her and said "Now you see here Alice. Ya ain't a freak, ya are a great girl with great creativity. You can't let kids like her make you lower than you are. Stick to what you want no matter the names and one day you'll show her and her friends what you're made of and if I see you I'll say 'That be a girl of potential'"
Alice hugged silver even tighter and cried some more due to never hearing compliments come to her before and silver understood and said "It's alright lassie. You're safe. You'll always be safe with ol' John Silver"
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Post by Alice on Apr 16, 2011 22:00:07 GMT -5
awwww! this is cute. i like it!
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Post by Frank (Dr.) Facilier on Apr 16, 2011 22:01:16 GMT -5
I practically cried reading my ending But it was cute thanks
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Post by John Silver on Apr 17, 2011 16:28:09 GMT -5
OK. This is the third chap of my silver/facilier story it's a day after the deal and silver is at a meeting place here ================================= Trail of adventure Chapter 3 Silver was out in the alley way of some building smoking a cigarette and waited for his new ally to come. Silver then saw a purple mercedes come and out popped facilier and the two men shook hands and then silver spoke "Alright mate. Where do you want me to look first?" Facilier pointed to the building behind him and silver looked and saw that the building was a bar. Silver pointed and had a questionable look to which facilier nodded and silver then came in with facilier behind him. A woman who looked to be around 32 looked at silver and gave him a wink to which he just grinned and walked off. Silver then whispered to facilier "I'll just ask that lady if she heard of the guy" Facilier chuckled "This better not be an excuse to talk to her as in romance" Silver shook his head "No mate she just seems to be the type to notice. Just tell me the man's name" Facilier sighed annoyed with how this was but neverless answered "The name is Ron colan" Silver nodded and walked to the woman and said "Well hey there pretty lass. What be your name? Bet it's just as lovely as you" The woman smiled and said "You're such a doll. Name's Darla Radcliffe who're you?" Silver just smiled and said "Silver be me lass. You know anybody named Ron colan" Darla nodded "He's my stupid ex boyfriend. He stalked me to no end til the police arrived to get ridda him now that he's killed people he doesn't talk to anybody including me" Facilier then bumped into the two and said "Well I hate to be such a rude man. But I'm here with him and we need to know where he's heading and where he is now" Darla nodded "You a cop?" Facilier shook his head "A lawyer with an undying sense of the law and the name is Frank facilier now tell me please" The poor woman nodded and sighed and looked at the two waiting men in front of her and then she replied "Lat time I saw him was yesterday but he paid no attention to me but he was out at the black cat. When I went there this morning to just get a drink I saw him there sleeping like the drunk he is" Silver nodded in thankfulness and walked off and facilier shook the woman's hand and said "Thanks babycakes gotta split" The woman smiled and said "Make sure to make him a jailbird will ya handsome?" Facilier smirked "That I will darling that I will"
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Post by John Silver on Apr 18, 2011 15:28:23 GMT -5
Yay! I'm on my fourth chapter! Well, now things get alittle messy.... ==============================
Silver looked around the black cat and saw many people there but didn't seem to find the guy. Facilier was looking harder than silver was looking under tables and such. Silver then saw a redheaded man come near facilier and silver knew what this meant due to being a criminal before. If the person came to another who was snooping around that meant they were the ones that the person was looking for..... and was going to murder him.
Facilier just smugly smiled as the redheaded man sneered "Think you're funny? Huh? You think it's funny doing your job and snoopin' around where I live and work?!" Facilier snorted "Actually yeah I do. You ron colan?" Ron nodded and snapped "So what?" Facilier handed out a paper and replied "I'm Frank facilier and I got a warrent from the police saying I'm supposed to find ya and call the cops when I did. Now, just sit there and enjoy yourself because it may be the last time you see this before you go to the bighouse" Ron laughed "Look at this guy! Thinkin' he's gonna arrest me" Ron then grabbed facilier and said "Watch yourself old man" He then grabbed a gun and pointed to facilier's left headside "You could get killed in miami"
Silver then grabbed another gun that ron seemed to be carrying and pointed at him "Let him go mate you ain't the only one who knows how to blast somebody. Drop it!" Ron dropped the gun and pushed facilier out of the way and punched Silver and then pounced on him. Then two other men came and grabbed facilier but facilier punched them and then attacked ron making him let go of silver then the two men ran away. Ron shouted "Well don't just stand there you idiots! Go after them and kill them. I won't go to jail! Not even for a true murder"
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